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So my mom and college advisor thought inom should redo my autobiography because they both thought it was just blah before. So I rewrote it. I&#;m afraid though that its too dull and or cliche. Please comment, inom will happily return the favor.

Thanks

Sifting through the pictures with my daughter, inom caught myself beginning to wax poetic about the "good old days". inom sense that she was becoming bored, but inom could not contain the mixed emotions of nostalgia, delight, and sadness that came with each new photograph. As it turned out, putting together this scrapbook was much more emotionally draining than inom had originally anticipated. Every year inom pledged to do something with the plethora of pictures cluttering our house, yet until now it had always been another fruitless upplösning, one that I never followed through with. The upcoming family reunion seemed like the perfect motivation to finally put tillsammans this scrapbook.

There were pictur

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peanut butter, but not on sandwiches and praying mantises and the slow cars on the highway. I told him that he loved an awful lot of things. He shrugged. I asked him if he ever loved anyone. He told me that he didn’t love people because people never lasted. Now burgers, those he could love. Burgers were reliable. “Hey,” he said once. “Hey, Emily. Listen to me. Don’t love people. Find something like a burger and love that.” I just nodded.

And so, when I started to love him, I felt like a fool. I was ashamed to see him in the office because my heart would grow ten sizes and I’d stop thinking about the weak coffee I drank every morning or the war between some countries and instead, I’d think about the life that I would have with him. It was fifth grade all over again, dealing with the realization that boys don’t have cooties and doodling names in hearts on my math worksheets. Only, this boy was different because he loved the slow cars on the highway more t

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<p>hey guys, i had a quick question on the autobiography essay. I’m applying to many schools and consequently have three pretty solid essays that i’ve been reusing and rephrasing for all of the prompts. One of them deals with an experience I had a few months back and I was hoping to reuse it for this (since none of my essays even remotely match the other two oO) but… well it’s kinda short for one thing (only about words) and its pretty early on in my life if i was to live the normal 80 years or w/e. It’s supposed to be a “page” out of the biography and out of meaning it’s after the midpoint of my life and all. </p>

<p>i was wondering if it would be buyable if i lengthed it a bit and then worked under the assumption that 1. the pages are not ’ x 11’ pieces of paper but are smaller like many novels (justifying the shorter length) and that 2. i was writing this at age